How to Write Bids That Get Noticed (Real Examples Included)

Writing the perfect bid is part art, part science. Here's how to stand out in a sea of freelancers.

Start with Personalization

Open with something that proves you read their job. Example: "Hi Sarah, I just read your need for a Shopify redesign — especially that part about boosting conversions."

Show You Understand the Problem

Summarize what you think they need: "It sounds like you're losing mobile users due to layout issues. I've fixed that for other eCommerce sites."

State Your Experience Clearly

Keep it tight. "I've built 30+ Shopify sites, including X & Y. Happy to show links."

Offer a First Step or Quick Win

Give them something for free — even an idea. "Happy to do a 10-min UX review or mockup first."

Close With Reassurance

"You'll get updates daily. No delays. Let's make it happen."

Example Full Bid:

Hi Sarah,

Just read your post about redesigning your Shopify store, especially the part about improving conversions.
I've worked on similar projects — here's one: [link].

You mentioned mobile drop-offs — I fixed that recently for a fashion brand by simplifying the menu and checkout flow.

I've built 30+ stores and offer quick turnarounds. I can even do a quick review before we start.

Let me know — happy to jump on a call.

– Alex